Tuesday, June 9, 2009

my eye view

I made a promise
Perhaps too soon
But I will follow it through
Trusting in you

I made a promise
We made it mine
A daily reminder
To let loose with time

I keep this promise
In secret I know why
But my pride takes face
And the promise is replaced

With a cover so superficial
Everyone is proud
Pride for pride
The true promise inside

Hidden from whispers
Gossip and lies
This promise is sacred
Behind those eyes.


2 comments:

nickflight said...

WOWSERS!!!

awemonselyawesome poem dude!!!!

Corrie said...

thanks nick. It was one of those poems that just writes itself - in a way! Glad you like it :-)